I love your story. I love the way you sort of gave you powers ;like in the movie frozen, when Elsa freezes every thing.
This is very good. I loved how you added more realistic ideas and problems. Also you had well formed paragraphs and correct grammar. One wish is that you would include more description. Overall amazing piece.
I love your story. I love the way you sort of gave you powers ;like in the movie frozen, when Elsa freezes every thing.
ReplyDeleteThis is very good. I loved how you added more realistic ideas and problems. Also you had well formed paragraphs and correct grammar. One wish is that you would include more description. Overall amazing piece.
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